I really enjoyed the story. I can just imagine in my head how the little girl felt. Her mother really wanted her to try out for the contest and that if I only lose some weight then all of the boys would like me. I just thought that if my friends were going to enter the beauty contest then.
The other parts of the story that i like was when she talks about how all of the girls look if they are beautiful or have a flat face and how some of the girls are smart but have on breats or hips. All of us practiced togeather.
And then in the end sweetly how the girl said to her mother that i really now the truth of way i lost the junior miss pageant I 'd lost this contest at birth i did not think that I was i most beautiful thing there. So now i now how she felt because i was not the most beautiful thing there was trying out for a cheerlader and i did not make it because There was alot of better looking girls their and the whole school had a vote and they wanted the pretty girls. I thought that I girl was going to get the junior miss pageant.
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I understand what you are saying but it was a little confusing to read.
It might help to put quotation marks around the text when you are repeating what was written.
good job
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